I started writing my paper months ago. In the beginning I just wrote down some small thoughts, sentences and idea's I had, without taking readability in mind. Now is the time to start making it a coherent paper, so I've been restructuring it the last days.
All three my supervisors gave their comments this week, and I've tried to incorporate their ideas. It's important for a paper like this that the first chapter, the introduction, is well-written. This keeps the reader interested, and allows him to better understand what the whole paper will be about.
Another important thing that could increase readability a lot is the use of (more) examples and illustrations. This is something I'll do next week.
Latest version of my paper.